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Note to the teacher:
This three-part writing exercise begins with a prewriting activity to be done without pen or paper, then asks students to draw or graph their memories, and finally encourages students to write.

The activity is adapted from a writing seminar given by the poet and teacher Mark Doty. Sometimes referred to as “automatic writing” or “writing down first thoughts,” this kind of writing process asks that the writer (in this case, the students) record uncensored, stream-of-consciousness thoughts and impressions.

 

 

Tools for Teachers

Activity: Revisiting Your First Home:
A Three-Part Writing Exercise


Part I

Ask your students to close their eyes and picture walking through the first house they ever lived in.

Tell them:
If you cannot remember the first house you ever lived in, be content to imagine the first house you do remember. Or perhaps, the house you live in now is the only house you ever lived in. Whatever the circumstances, you are going to imagine slowly walking through each room and looking carefully at each detail in that room.

First enter the front or side or back door. Do you have a key? Is the door open? Are there smells of cooking or food coming from the kitchen? The sound of a TV or radio? What or who greets you as you walk through the front door? And where do you end up once you’ve walked through the door? A hallway? A room?

In the next few minutes you will walk your way through the house, trying to remember as much detail as possible. What colors are the walls? Are there pictures on them or photographs? What kind of furniture sits in each room? As you slowly walk through the house, remember as much as you can about each room. You can pan the room or scan from the bottom of the floor to the top of the ceiling. You can also look out windows, under the cushions of sofas, or through magazine racks. Or you can just enter the room and see what strikes you about it—see what first comes barreling through the filter of your memory.

The point is to go as slowly as possible and to observe what you see as if you are actually visiting the house. You will have at least 10 minutes of undisturbed time to do this exercise. You will not have to report back what you’ve found. You will walk through the house slowly and take as much time as you like in each room.

Possible Modifications for Part I

1. As a class, brainstorm possible questions to help draw out details about each room. Do this before you begin the visualization.

2. Ask the student to walk through the house at various ages and times of his or her life—for instance, as an eight-year-old coming home from school on a rainy day.

3. If a student is having a hard time visualizing the house, you can work with him or her individually, asking him or her to describe the rooms in the house to you while you record the descriptions. You can prompt the student’s memory with questions that ask for a detailed and a specific kind of recall.

What room are you in right now?

Are you standing or walking on a hardwood floor? A carpet? Linoleum?

What do you see when you stand in the center of the room and look straight ahead?

Does the room smell a particular way?

Are there windows? Are they open?

What’s the temperature like in the house?

4. You can also ask students to work in pairs, taking turns recording and narrating.

 

Part II

This part of the activity asks students to refine further and expand their memory of their first house through drawing and graphing. It relies on Part I of the activity.

Materials: Graph paper and unlined paper, pencil, or pen

Ask students to draw a floor plan of their remembered houses (if there is more than one level to their remembered house, let them know they can draw each level on a separate piece of paper or choose just one level to draw). When students are done drawing the floor plan, ask them to place an object of significance in each of the rooms.

 

Part III

This part of the activity consists of a timed free-writing exercise.

Materials: Paper and pencil or pen, or a computer

Ask students to choose three objects that they placed in their house. Ask students to write about the objects, spending five to seven minutes on each one.

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